Monday, August 10, 2009

stenciled birds
the sky
on her shirt

a blank stare...
those deep blue eyes
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2 comments:

  1. T.MigratoriusAugust 11, 2009 at 2:12 PM

    Hello EC. I like this tanka and the comparison between the sky and her eyes. Nice one.

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  2. Dave SerjeantAugust 13, 2009 at 5:25 AM

    fantastic. the blank stare did it for me

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